tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post2200668598645999581..comments2024-03-19T07:43:40.609-04:00Comments on The Camel Saloon: LISTENINGThe Camel Saloonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466326145539153263noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-21769134550315404232012-10-12T01:36:19.890-04:002012-10-12T01:36:19.890-04:00As I was growing older, I noticed how invisible I ...As I was growing older, I noticed how invisible I had become to the outside world, yet my inner substance has grown richer with the passing of time. Beautifull poem, Alan. Regards Irina. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-40316545514898666912012-10-03T14:34:37.097-04:002012-10-03T14:34:37.097-04:00amazzzziiiing work,congratulations and more and mo...amazzzziiiing work,congratulations and more and more brialiant success :)Nichi'shttp://www.facebook.com/?ref=tn_tnmnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-57859402542598713032012-09-26T13:56:46.022-04:002012-09-26T13:56:46.022-04:00Hello Alan, this is very nice...deep...makes me fe...Hello Alan, this is very nice...deep...makes me feel....makes me think....<br />...posting as anonymous....Elenita<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-11396216162047451562012-09-25T17:12:05.043-04:002012-09-25T17:12:05.043-04:00Very nice art and poem. Post nice journals.Very nice art and poem. Post nice journals.EagleHawkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09662034391524598434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-36515672707277392652012-09-25T11:25:36.546-04:002012-09-25T11:25:36.546-04:00Wow Alan good job .As always your poems make us th...Wow Alan good job .As always your poems make us think. So proud of you. You are certainly an Artist with great feeling. Now get over to West Hawk and write me a Poem. Miss you both. Not sure if this will be published I do not have any of those accounts so had to go as Anonymous SharonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-34229101977656775932012-09-25T01:35:35.991-04:002012-09-25T01:35:35.991-04:00Alan, I really like this poem....it shows depth an...Alan, I really like this poem....it shows depth and makes me kind of sad or better it touches me...yes....well done...you did it again...Brigittenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-30910979660597783752012-09-22T19:12:58.033-04:002012-09-22T19:12:58.033-04:00Alan is a fine, smooth poet. He creates the right ...Alan is a fine, smooth poet. He creates the right mood with carefully selected words. He puts words together in a charming and sometimes humorous way. Right measure of everything: emotions, observations, metaphors and the reality of his inner world. Well done Alan.Branka Cubrilohttp://www.brankacubriloauthor.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-57663061850182057622012-09-21T06:30:51.338-04:002012-09-21T06:30:51.338-04:00very nice poem! it is so naturalism of poem. congr...very nice poem! it is so naturalism of poem. congratulation Alan!janahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01010600327383497605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-83473546622939290522012-09-21T01:21:10.114-04:002012-09-21T01:21:10.114-04:00Alan,
you know I loved this poem!!
is a beautiful...Alan, <br />you know I loved this poem!!<br />is a beautiful invitation to reflection,<br />about 'be someone' ...<br /><br />thank you, my friendDenise SCARAMAIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03900073012771855869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-28662600174868016182012-09-20T18:26:05.217-04:002012-09-20T18:26:05.217-04:00Alan...I absolutely love this poem...I am rather s...Alan...I absolutely love this poem...I am rather speechless, believe it or not. Excellent work.<br />-Sheila K. MullallyLillySheihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11344208899495741237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-429099782994620462012-09-20T14:56:40.728-04:002012-09-20T14:56:40.728-04:00It is a lovely poem with a stillness inherent in t...It is a lovely poem with a stillness inherent in the words. Each verse of the poem stands alone making a simplistic statement about a state of being in time, in existence, within oneself. The last line has a subtle emphatic conclusion, which is suitably climactic and provides closure to the reader. <br /><br />Enjoyed the read! Thank you!<br />Sana Rafiqhttp://www.theneglectedratio.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-36897236571077578292012-09-20T13:53:45.140-04:002012-09-20T13:53:45.140-04:00Alone and invisible, we all are. This is very frig...Alone and invisible, we all are. This is very frightening and sad realization. Most of us fill the invisibility or emptiness with obligations, good/bad deeds, addictions… name it. And some of us are brave and strong enough to just stop and look into that nothingness. In essence, no one is empty, we all have a substance- that is as the poem says ‘can nourish the land and make the grass grow *even at night*’. This is realization of oneself. The realization of another person’s essence perhaps impossible, so we almost never attempt to see it in others. So we remain invisible… Greatly insightful poem, thank you.Nina K. Orlovskayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17525787909907984583noreply@blogger.com