tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post8132424746456741200..comments2024-03-19T07:43:40.609-04:00Comments on The Camel Saloon: LolaThe Camel Saloonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466326145539153263noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6206746352956093398.post-91250518393755155332012-09-10T23:26:37.533-04:002012-09-10T23:26:37.533-04:00I love this poem. The alliteration is striking wit...I love this poem. The alliteration is striking without being repetitive, and the brilliant imagery flows through the poem without cluttering the diction. Instead, the imagery nearly creates the diction, as if beginning in darkness and illuminating the path of the poem forward, like a rising sun illuminating a room in the morning. Well done.M.N. O'Briennoreply@blogger.com